Grammar Expert Needed

I need to identify what is structurally wrong with the following sentences and then correct it. For example, some errors may be sentence fragments or run on sentences.

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Diagnose errors and correct.

1. A social host may be liable for the consequences of a guest’s drunken driving if the host directly serves the
alcohol, continues serving after the guest is visibly drunk, and knowing that the guest will soon be driving
home.

2. Her innovative programming drastically increased attendance at the youth programs.

3. The firm entered into a two year contract with Ms. Taylor, who introduced several new products which increased sales and earned her an “employee of the year” award.

4. By silencing you, I believe your teacher violated your First Amendment rights.

5. The trial court, in dismissing Mann’s complaint under Rule 12(b)(6) of the Federal Rules of Civil Procedure,
stated that it was not necessary to decide the merits of defendant’s argument.

6. The defendant’s acting with deliberate indifference is the second requirement.

7. Robertson granted visitation rights to Ms. Cavallo after she had abandoned Julia, abused another child, and she
had committed heinous acts of abuse against Julia.

8. Although settlement will probably not result in the compensation of your damages to the same extent as that
which would occur if you prevail at a formal hearing, it is a much quicker and more flexible process.

9. Only when the court would be interfering in inherently ecclesiastical matters and the court would be excessively
entangled in Church matters will a church be able to avoid state laws.

10. By firing you, your contract was violated.

11. Such neutrality on the part of Utopia’s School District cannot be compared to cases such as Lee, Engel, and
Abington.

12. Julia was born prematurely and shortly thereafter began suffering withdrawal symptoms associated with drug
addiction on August 3.

13. Should these matters go to trial, the Board will be exposed to the possibility of having to pay compensatory
and punitive damages.
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Hello, in my directions I was very specific about the instructions and even gave an example. Please re-read and re-do the assignment. Thanks
09:01 AM
I need to identify what is structurally wrong with the following sentences and then correct it. For example, some errors may be sentence fragments or run on sentences.
09:07 AM
That means I have to state what is wrong with the sentence.
09:07 AM
For example, issue number one could have the issue of being a run on sentence.
09:08 AM
Are you famiiar with the grammar rules of the English language?
09:09 AM

Okay o took it like i just look at the sentence and then correct
09:12 AM

So you mean i have to write and say for instance sentence structure and then correct
09:12 AM
You have me a little bit worried
09:15 AM
Should I be?
09:15 AM
For example (and this is not correct so dont’ copy)
09:16 AM
1. A social host may be liable for the consequences of a guest’s drunken driving if the host directly serves the
alcohol, continues serving after the guest is visibly drunk, and knowing that the guest will soon be driving
home.
09:16 AM
Issue: the tenses of the verbs do not match.
09:16 AM
Fix:
09:16 AM
1. A social host may be liable for the consequences of a guest’s drunken driving if the host directly serves the
alcohol, continues to serve the guest after they are visibly drunk, and knows that the guest will soon drive home.
09:17 AM
I know that you guys are a group of people, so maybe find someone who knows the grammar rules well.
09:19 AM

I might not be able to do that because i do not know all the rules and i dont want to present to you poor work, i thought it was just correcting the fragmented sentences and the sentence structure.
09:20 AM

That needs someone who totally understands grammer at the highest level and it is not just researching on the internet but understanding what it means
09:21 AM
Ok.